Photo Critique Forum

Please post no more than five images a day and respond to as many images as you post. Critics, please be constructive, specific, and nice! Moderated by gahspidy and mtbbrian.
Featured Photo
Photo by hminx

Photo by hminx
Featured Photo Archive >>
By posting on the Photo Critique forum you agree to post only your own photos, be respectful, and give back as much as you receive. This is a moderated forum and anything abusive or off-topic will be removed.
Page 1 of 2 12 LastLast
Results 1 to 25 of 30

Thread: Winter, Plate 1

  1. #1
    Senior Member draymorton's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Project Bloomberg
    Posts
    2,131

    Winter, Plate 1

    .....................................
    Last edited by draymorton; 02-02-2011 at 04:09 PM.

  2. #2
    Member NKP68's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    The Bronx NYC
    Posts
    406

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    Beautiful face, great eyes. Not sure if you were going for a borderless transition from BG to her hat but I like it. Works with the softness of her face. The blue to white color bands are ok but the dark areas to her right and left detract too much from her. I also have an issue with the wisp of hair that seems to be growing from her ear. I would crop some of the left frame even if it put her in the center. Great subject.
    Ed

  3. #3
    Senior Member hminx's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Location
    New Zealand
    Posts
    2,154

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    Outstanding Dray , Love the way the eyes are sharp and the rest of the image has that wonderful softness
    Pete

    Isn't it a cool thing in nature that the colours never seem to clash...

    I have no issues with you editing my photos

  4. #4
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Oct 2010
    Location
    Chicago, IL, USA
    Posts
    595

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    Great selection of colors - they eyes and the hat work well together ...there is a painting in the Des Moines Art Center of a lady in a similar hat sipping coffee in some diner in the 20's ...this photo makes me feel as though I just met her :-)

  5. #5
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Oct 2010
    Location
    Chicago, IL, USA
    Posts
    595

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    BTW, the painting is by Edward Hopper, Automat, 1927 ...

    http://www.kevinchoi.com/blog/?p=67

  6. #6
    Re Member LeeIs's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2005
    Location
    Toronto, Canada
    Posts
    3,403

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    Amazing. I think it's just about perfect. The only thing for me, and it's tiny tiny, but I wish she was a little bit higher in the frame. she seems a bit too low. other than that. FANTASTIC!
    Liban

    "There is nothing like returning to a place that remains unchanged to find the ways in which you yourself have." Nelson Mandela

    Nikon Samurai #23 - The Alexei Ponikarovsky of PR

    Havana Cuba Photography

  7. #7
    Senior Member draymorton's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Project Bloomberg
    Posts
    2,131

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    .................................................. ..........
    Last edited by draymorton; 02-02-2011 at 04:33 PM.

  8. #8
    Re Member LeeIs's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2005
    Location
    Toronto, Canada
    Posts
    3,403

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    What fringing? the light spots on the blue and dark areas in the BG? I don't see any fringing unless that's what you mean.
    Liban

    "There is nothing like returning to a place that remains unchanged to find the ways in which you yourself have." Nelson Mandela

    Nikon Samurai #23 - The Alexei Ponikarovsky of PR

    Havana Cuba Photography

  9. #9
    Senior Member draymorton's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Project Bloomberg
    Posts
    2,131

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    Well, it's a very good sign that you don't see it!

    But I'm talking about the green on her right shoulder, hair, and left cheek and the magenta on her left shoulder and hair. There's also some green around her hat. I tried a lot of different things (ACR, CS defringe, painting with black on a color/hue layer...) and none worked...

    I'd love to know, too, what caused the fringing in the first place.
    Last edited by draymorton; 02-02-2011 at 09:47 AM.

  10. #10
    Senior Member draymorton's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Project Bloomberg
    Posts
    2,131

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    The other question is... straight up, is this image flattering of her?

  11. #11
    Re Member LeeIs's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2005
    Location
    Toronto, Canada
    Posts
    3,403

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    Couldn't delete this post so just editing it out.
    Last edited by LeeIs; 02-02-2011 at 10:05 AM.
    Liban

    "There is nothing like returning to a place that remains unchanged to find the ways in which you yourself have." Nelson Mandela

    Nikon Samurai #23 - The Alexei Ponikarovsky of PR

    Havana Cuba Photography

  12. #12
    Re Member LeeIs's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2005
    Location
    Toronto, Canada
    Posts
    3,403

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    Quote Originally Posted by draymorton
    The other question is... straight up, is this image flattering of her?
    she looks like a movie star. is that flattering enough? lol
    Liban

    "There is nothing like returning to a place that remains unchanged to find the ways in which you yourself have." Nelson Mandela

    Nikon Samurai #23 - The Alexei Ponikarovsky of PR

    Havana Cuba Photography

  13. #13
    Re Member LeeIs's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2005
    Location
    Toronto, Canada
    Posts
    3,403

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    Maybe I should give this a try and figure it out before polluting your thread? hehe.

    The Sponge tool works just fine. No need to mask anything. The Sponge tool is a desaturate tool that you can control like a brush. I tried it and it works fine. u gotta get in there though. zoom right in.
    Liban

    "There is nothing like returning to a place that remains unchanged to find the ways in which you yourself have." Nelson Mandela

    Nikon Samurai #23 - The Alexei Ponikarovsky of PR

    Havana Cuba Photography

  14. #14
    Senior Member draymorton's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Project Bloomberg
    Posts
    2,131

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    Cool - thanks! I never knew what the sponge tool was for. lol Will give it a try.

    p.s. pollute away!

  15. #15
    Senior Member draymorton's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Project Bloomberg
    Posts
    2,131

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    Quote Originally Posted by LeeIs
    she looks like a movie star. is that flattering enough? lol
    Um... yeah, that'll do.

    I agree, of course. Just wasn't sure if others might see something I didn't. I'm hardly a neutral party here, so I needed other, perhaps more detached, perspectives...

  16. #16
    Re Member LeeIs's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2005
    Location
    Toronto, Canada
    Posts
    3,403

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    Quote Originally Posted by draymorton
    Um... yeah, that'll do.

    I agree, of course. Just wasn't sure if others might see something I didn't. I'm hardly a neutral party here, so I needed other, perhaps more detached, perspectives...
    Oh yeah I totally understand. I enjoy negative critiques as much as positive ones, if not a little more. it's nice for fresh eyes to look at your image all the time. but for this one, the moment I opened it, it looked great, like a scene from a classic film. It really is one of the best portraits i've seen around here. and I'm not that much in to portraits!
    Liban

    "There is nothing like returning to a place that remains unchanged to find the ways in which you yourself have." Nelson Mandela

    Nikon Samurai #23 - The Alexei Ponikarovsky of PR

    Havana Cuba Photography

  17. #17
    Senior Shooter Greg McCary's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2006
    Location
    Rome Ga.
    Posts
    10,550

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    Amazing processiing, I almost think you could take some off of the top to balance it some. As it is I think there needs to be some more space at the bottom, If you didn't want to trim the top that is.
    I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..

    Sony a99/a7R

  18. #18
    mod squad gahspidy's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2004
    Location
    N.Y. U.S.A.
    Posts
    8,368

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    Really beautiful portrait. Love the shalow DOF and the soft icy colors go well with the wintry mood.

    I am not too distracted by the dark areas in the bg, but I do also feel like reducing the contrast or intensity of them would help bring an even greater softness and focus on the subject.

    The blue of the sky fading into the hat immediately has me thinking its a post processing oversight, but really its nothing at all to worry about. Just caught my attention, but does not make me feel any less impressed with the portrait.

    I agree with Liban and Greg about it being tight at the bottom, which is probably my only real concern with the entire image. Feels a little uncomfortable the way her neck is cropped and chin low to the frame. Cropping from the top would not improve that for me as its not a matter of balance imo.
    It certainly is not any deal breaker though, and what you have is a wonderful portrait.

    Glad it finally worked out with the all elusive one
    please do not edit and repost my photos


    gary


  19. #19
    Senior Member draymorton's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Project Bloomberg
    Posts
    2,131

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    Thanks, guys.

    WIll see what I can do to fix the blue. It was bothering me, as well. Couldn't figure out if it mattered that much.

    Lightening the dark areas shouldn't be a problem.

    The crop should be an easy fix. But I found that when I cropped too far down, it looked too ordinary or something.

    Gary - thanks... me too!

  20. #20
    Senior Member draymorton's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Project Bloomberg
    Posts
    2,131

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    Quote Originally Posted by LeeIs
    It really is one of the best portraits i've seen around here. and I'm not that much in to portraits!
    Thanks man!

  21. #21
    GB1
    GB1 is offline
    Moderator GB1's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2004
    Location
    San Diego CA
    Posts
    9,960

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    wow, this one's different Dray. It looks partially desaturated though I doubt that it is. The rain/snow storm adds a nice twist and the composition is excellent. I would prefer it to have a little more DOF, but the eyes are basically sharp and that's all that's absolutely critical. Nice work,

    G
    Photography Software and Post Processing Forum Moderator. Visit here!

    -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    Feel free to edit and repost my photos as part of your critique.
    -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    My Site

  22. #22
    Senior Member jetrim's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2008
    Location
    Ft. Lauderdale
    Posts
    3,229

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    A bit of a departure from some of your earlier stuff but I LOVE this!

    Quote Originally Posted by draymorton
    Self-critique: I don't know how to get rid of the fringing. Neither PS nor ACR efringing did anything. Any tips?
    How I've come to address this in photoshop is to select the sponge tool (in flyout w/ dodge & burn tools) set it to desaturate - 50-100% depending... and paint over the fringe with a small soft edge brush.

  23. #23
    Senior Member draymorton's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Project Bloomberg
    Posts
    2,131

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    .................................................. ...
    Last edited by draymorton; 02-02-2011 at 04:10 PM.

  24. #24
    Senior Member draymorton's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    Project Bloomberg
    Posts
    2,131

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    .................................................. ............
    Last edited by draymorton; 02-02-2011 at 04:10 PM.

  25. #25
    Senior Member armando_m's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    Guadalajara Mexico
    Posts
    4,486

    Re: Winter, Plate 1

    nice shallow DOF
    beautiful light , is it flash (difused) or natural light ? seems in the reflection in her eyes you used flash altough exif says falsh did not fire , perhaps a window behing you ?

    I like the contrast on her face from the 1st image and the light background of the last one
    and yes needs a bit more space under her chin

Page 1 of 2 12 LastLast

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 6 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 6 guests)

Similar Threads

  1. Need Help On Manfrotto 222 Head QR Plate
    By Anthony Reiss in forum Help Files
    Replies: 14
    Last Post: 02-23-2010, 05:03 PM
  2. Out at the plate
    By JSPhoto in forum Sports Photography
    Replies: 17
    Last Post: 04-27-2007, 10:37 AM
  3. Out At The Plate
    By swmdrayfan in forum Sports Photography
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 05-12-2006, 05:26 AM
  4. Play at the Plate
    By BVC in forum Photo Critique
    Replies: 6
    Last Post: 05-07-2004, 11:29 AM
  5. As if you don't have enough on your plate
    By natatbeach in forum Site Feedback
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 02-07-2004, 08:56 AM

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •