Window from the Conservatory- Does it work?

[villenadecorte]

Hi All,

Here is another "window" picture, which I shot at the SF Conservatory of Flowers back in June.

This pic has been cropped down from its original- as I figured focusing a little more on the details of one window would be more effective than, say, 20 windows. I've also adjusted levels slightly and upped contrast a tad in Photoshop.

Does this work? Is it interesting and composed enough?
These windows really reflected how I felt in there, its about 85 degrees and 100% humidity. These windows just looked slimy, gross and increased my sense of feeling trapped in that hot humid place. (I really did have a good time there! ;) )

Critique away

Thanks,
VillenaDeCorte