Does this work?

[CaraRose]

There was this little mill along the Roaring Fork Motor Trial. It was really dark in there and had a window cut out in the side. My mom was down at the riverside taking a picture of the water, so I pulled back and framed this through the window in the mill. I like it but I worry that since the window frame is so dark, it may not work since you can't entirely tell that its a window.

That's my ma in the right hand side, shooting a picture of the river.

[Seb]

There was this little mill along the Roaring Fork Motor Trial. It was really dark in there and had a window cut out in the side. My mom was down at the riverside taking a picture of the water, so I pulled back and framed this through the window in the mill. I like it but I worry that since the window frame is so dark, it may not work since you can't entirely tell that its a window.

That's my ma in the right hand side, shooting a picture of the river.

Hello again CaraRose.

From a purely technical point of view, this picture isn't '"top" (it could be sharper, the colors could be more vivid...). However, as far as composition goes this may be the most interesting picture that I have seen from you so far. Frankly, I truly like this one. Your point of view is interesting.

regards

Seb

[modena]

get rid of that black frame, it's pointless

[Seb]

get rid of that black frame, it's pointless

Hello Modena,

What's left if CaraRose get rid of the frame/wall? She might crop part of it but it seems to me that this frame provide the effect that makes that composition works.

regards

Seb