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    Wildflower Field

    Hello all, I took some photos while in the Uinta National Forest a couple of days ago, most of which didn't turn out so great but I liked this one quite a bit.

    Please give some advice or thoughts on this photo, I took quite a few of this field with the sky in the background but liked this one the most. I felt it emphisized the flowers with the least amount of distractions.

    Anyway, as always thanks in advance for the advice.

    Thanks
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    Quote Originally Posted by Irie Times
    Hello all, I took some photos while in the Uinta National Forest a couple of days ago, most of which didn't turn out so great but I liked this one quite a bit.

    Please give some advice or thoughts on this photo, I took quite a few of this field with the sky in the background but liked this one the most. I felt it emphisized the flowers with the least amount of distractions.

    Anyway, as always thanks in advance for the advice.

    Thanks
    Hello,

    I think that I would crop at the top of the frame to get rid of the area where there are no flowers. Other than that I like it.

    Would it be possible to try an even lower angle? I don't know if it would be interesting or not but it might worth a try.

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    Different Angle..

    I did take a few of this field at a different angle, however I didn't like the aiplane trails in the air. I wated for some time for them to disapear but the planes kept coming, it must be a common flight zone.

    Anyway here is one of the field at a lower angle, thanks for the input.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Irie Times
    I did take a few of this field at a different angle, however I didn't like the aiplane trails in the air. I wated for some time for them to disapear but the planes kept coming, it must be a common flight zone.

    Anyway here is one of the field at a lower angle, thanks for the input.
    Hey again,

    Thank your for displaying another one. Actually, I prefer your second picture. The lower angle seems to work better here. Beside, having some mountains and sky gives a perspective of scale that the first picture don't have (a simple observation, this is not necessarily a problem as far as I am concerned). I don't mind the airplane trails at all but that is just a matter of personal tastes.
    The only thing that disturb me is the bent horizon line. I suspect that the field you have shot is on a hill but I would straigthen the horizon unless shooting the scene from further away so we clearly see that this is an hill (but then, that would be a totally different picture and you would loose your point of view).

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    Quote Originally Posted by Seb
    Hey again,

    Thank your for displaying another one. Actually, I prefer your second picture. The lower angle seems to work better here. Beside, having some mountains and sky gives a perspective of scale that the first picture don't have (a simple observation, this is not necessarily a problem as far as I am concerned). I don't mind the airplane trails at all but that is just a matter of personal tastes.
    The only thing that disturb me is the bent horizon line. I suspect that the field you have shot is on a hill but I would straigthen the horizon unless shooting the scene from further away so we clearly see that this is an hill (but then, that would be a totally different picture and you would loose your point of view).

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    I think the tilted trees would then be more disturbing than the flowered hillside.

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    Thanks for your inputs..

    I appreciate your comments regarding these photo's, I agrree that I like the shot from a lower angle also it does give a better prespective.

    Thanks

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    Quote Originally Posted by Chunk
    I think the tilted trees would then be more disturbing than the flowered hillside.
    OMG Chuck,

    You are absolutely right. I withdraw my comment about the horizon line. I was so drawn by the foreground that I somewhat forgot about the trees.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Irie Times
    I did take a few of this field at a different angle, however I didn't like the aiplane trails in the air. I wated for some time for them to disapear but the planes kept coming, it must be a common flight zone.

    Anyway here is one of the field at a lower angle, thanks for the input.

    I like the second one better also. The airplane trails do not bother me and I love the colors, the blue sky adding to the picture, and the idea of seeing so many beautiful flowers in a field. Question: Did you lie down on the ground to get this perspective or were the flowers actually that high? Just curious.

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    Thanks for the nice words Betty

    To answer your question I didn't lay down they where actually tall enough I could set up my tripod without extending the legs and it put the camera at that height.

    Thanks

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    Quote Originally Posted by Irie Times
    To answer your question I didn't lay down they where actually tall enough I could set up my tripod without extending the legs and it put the camera at that height.

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    That is great! I love it!!

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    The second shot with the sky is the keeper. The other just does not offer any sense of contrast. Might even look better later in the day with a less harsh sunlight.
    Good shot
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    Second is a winner

    Quote Originally Posted by Irie Times
    I did take a few of this field at a different angle, however I didn't like the aiplane trails in the air. I wated for some time for them to disapear but the planes kept coming, it must be a common flight zone.

    Anyway here is one of the field at a lower angle, thanks for the input.
    Nothing of interest to catch the eye in the first.If you had a handy child you could have put him/her sitting in amongst the flowers holding one or just looking at them. The second is for the wall.Well done.
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