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  1. 02-04-2004, 08:30 AM #1
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    field of dreams

    a pretty flower patch near where I work. comments and critique welcome.

    Ray
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  2. 02-04-2004, 11:41 AM #2
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    looks really nice on my monitor. composition and color are spot on. i wish the green was more vibrant.
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    I like how your composition and colors in this photograph. Very nice control of depth of field.
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  4. 02-04-2004, 06:33 PM #4
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    vibrant

    I really like this shot and I love the colors and crispness of the flower in the foreground...nice to see you posting again...the comp is nice as well and I like that the gras isn't too saturated(green) it just provides that much more contrast to the vibrant flowers...
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  5. 02-06-2004, 10:05 AM #5
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    Quote Originally Posted by schrackman
    a pretty flower patch near where I work. comments and critique welcome.

    Ray
    Reseda, CA


    this is a great shot, though the cut off flower petals in bg are a very minor flaw. may i suggest tilting the camera slightly higher to include more sky?

    Ray, gab the Bowhays and form a trio....

    Gene will do telephoto close ups, penny the wide angle landscape shots from above and last and definitely not least you get the wide angle closups from ground level!!!!
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  6. 02-06-2004, 03:42 PM #6
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    Thanks for all your input, folks. I appreciate it much!

    Paul, I think you're on to something there!!

    Would I vote for him again? Yep, at least one more time. ;)

    One last comment...I can't seem to view any images on this new forum from my macintosh computer at home. I am using IE 5.1 for mac, but no images show except the avatars. What gives?

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  7. 02-07-2004, 12:25 AM #7
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    Hi Penny,

    Well, I can't run safari because I'm on OS 9. I can run Opera 6.03, however, and have downloaded it and am using it as I write. It's about twice as fast as IE, but I sacrifice a bit in the way of asthetics now. Ah well, at least I save a bit of time and at least I can now view the pictures.

    Oh, and thank you for your comment!

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