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    Bank tower (does this work?)

    I shot a few buildings yesterday, without a shift lens I'm trying to work with my equipment and shoot buildings from corners, this building still has vertical lines but the convergence is less than shooting the entire building, does this work for you?
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    Re: Bank tower (does this work?)

    Bajan, I think this shot is very good , from a framing and perspective point. I like the sign on the bank in the upper portion of the frame and , the clouds reflected in the glass panels. I also like that the sky is included in the upper corner frame.The corner line not running vertically straight with the frame is a good thing here, especially since it is so close to the middle. This does need a levels adj. to bring up the range of tones between light and dark. This as it is, is very dim and muted. Hopefully, it was not underexposed. Nice shot
    please do not edit and repost my photos


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    Re: Bank tower (does this work?)

    Gary:

    I bracketed so I have a range of shots, I'm not all that well versed on PS so if anyone wishes to make some adjustments and tell me what they did and repost, I'd be grateful. If you wish to so do E-mail me jeremy@nobigtalk.com and I'll send you the files.

    TIA

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    Re: Bank tower (does this work?)

    Bajan, I did a quick auto-adjust, using Studioline. Here's the result....
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