Across the road - Winter Scene

[gil ab ca]

early Saturday evening moon shot

[NKP68]

I like it. Nice colors in the sky and clouds and nice contrast between the deep red of the buildings and the snow. I also like the composition and placement of the moon. The only thing I would do is crop out the green building and pine tree on the right of the frame. They draw my eye away from the rest of the shot.

Ed

[gil ab ca]

Thanks Ed. I thought of doing that but I didn't couldn't do that and leave the red garage intact, and I did want to show the snow stuck on the side of the green shed.

[NKP68]

You cut off the left side of the other building and I think that looks fine. I don't think the green shed does anything to improve the shot.

[GB1]

Simple and clean. It's a bit soft and I am not overjoyed with the far right green structure, but I like the placement of the moon, the clean snow and the red houses. The tall tree works to inject some height variation.

Welcome to the boards btw!

G

[gil ab ca]

Thanks for the comments - I cut off a school bus on the left side. I do agree that the green building would be best cropped.

[Iguanamom]

agreed, that green shed is an eyesore in this shot.

[gil ab ca]

A little PhotoShop manipulation.

[Iguanamom]

better.
mids need tweaking...you're closer though.

[gil ab ca]

I agree. It will have to wait until I can play with it in LR.