You know, you keep posting better and better pics each time. This one grabs me 'cause it's a perspective not many of us got in high school. I did, but only because I wasn't able to get back up! Blood, bruises, etc... and the hall was filled with onlookers- would have been a great shot- all shuffling feet and blood on the floor. But enough of that...
Is this on your little P&S digi? I like this. It reminds me of acetate overlay prints people do in the B&W photo classes at my local community college. Poetry/prose overlaid on an image. I would suggest making the text fully black and with a stronger sans serif font than this one. Some more DOF would ease it to my eyes, as would darkening the shadows a bit. The comosition is just fine and the words are great also. I'm really liking your experimenting with mixed media. Keep it up!
"We've all been raised by television to believe that one day we'll all be millionaires and movie gods and rock stars -- but we won't. And we're slowly learning that fact. And we're very, very pissed off."
I think it is a little flat, contrast wise. But, other then that I like it. There is something about it that pulls you in. Everyone feels like that at some point. Some more then others, but everyone has gone through it.
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Originally Posted by katt
