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your is possesive

YOU'RE is you are. As in: You are all alone

other then that it is a somewhat chilling photograph. which I think it is meant to be.

This has the feel of an anti-drug ad.

almo

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Originally Posted by katt

your is possesive

YOU'RE is you are. As in: You are all alone

other then that it is a somewhat chilling photograph. which I think it is meant to be.

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Yeah i know..i figured that out later on...but im too lazy to do it...is it goood...???

It's unique which is what draws me to it.

Good job!

Very strong and an attention getter. But I'm with Katt, change it to "you're".

You know, you keep posting better and better pics each time. This one grabs me 'cause it's a perspective not many of us got in high school. I did, but only because I wasn't able to get back up! Blood, bruises, etc... and the hall was filled with onlookers- would have been a great shot- all shuffling feet and blood on the floor. But enough of that...
Is this on your little P&S digi? I like this. It reminds me of acetate overlay prints people do in the B&W photo classes at my local community college. Poetry/prose overlaid on an image. I would suggest making the text fully black and with a stronger sans serif font than this one. Some more DOF would ease it to my eyes, as would darkening the shadows a bit. The comosition is just fine and the words are great also. I'm really liking your experimenting with mixed media. Keep it up!

I think it is a little flat, contrast wise. But, other then that I like it. There is something about it that pulls you in. Everyone feels like that at some point. Some more then others, but everyone has gone through it.

The composition is great.