I have to agree with almo on this one...this is just not working for me.
Don't get me wrong, this is a solid shot and all the technical qualities are there. But compared to your other shots (in the series) this is not on the level. For me, it has to do with some of the mystery and emotion that the other pictures have. This one is nice, but I'm not captivated by it. I like the idea of someone in the photo (the warehouse) but this guy is just too much IMHO.

Cheers.