Toddler in autumn leaves

[Piet]

What do you people think of these aside the fact that the foot is chopped off.Thanks.Piet.

[erich6]

Very nice subject. The composition is OK except as you noted. I would have included a bit more of the subject in the top photo though. Also, the photos are muted and I think they would benefit from more contrast and color saturation. Also, they seem to be a bit underexposed.

Erich

[villenadecorte]

Great concepts on each. I think the first one has a great dof, however I think the color is a tad muted... must have been shady under the tree? Her face seems grey-like. Ditto for the second, aside from the hat- which is way overexposed on the top in comparison to the rest of the hat, as are her hands. Also, I would shot this more from the right, rather than centering her in the composition, and ofcourse the foot.
Again, great subject and great job capturing a kid on film (they're tough when their toddlers they run!)

[Piet]

Thanks you guy's. I noticed yout comments and will apply with next possible shoot.
Piet.