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Thread: Portrait of J

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    Portrait of J

    I took this shot of my little girl today and messed with some editing. C&C anyone? What do you like, what do you not like?

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    Re: Portrait of J

    it's personal preference for me... I am not a fan of cross processing.. BUT this would look cool black and white

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    Re: Portrait of J

    the focus seems sharp on the tip of her nose, but not on her eyes

    the eyes are too saturated but a wee bit blurry, perhaps sharp and bit less saturated would go better with the rest of the odd colors and softness

    maybe B&W as phil suggested ?

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    Re: Portrait of J

    Not to keen on the purple cast, but as already stated sharpen eyes and B&W this would be a wall hanger
    Pete

    Isn't it a cool thing in nature that the colours never seem to clash...

    I have no issues with you editing my photos

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    Re: Portrait of J

    Ok I did a b&w version:

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    Re: Portrait of J

    Well, to me it's a nice photo but I think it has one major flaw -- her eyes aren't sharp. Looks like her hair on her near shoulder is sharp and maybe the tip of her nose. But the eyes are what we look at.

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