Photo Critique Forum

Please post no more than five images a day and respond to as many images as you post. Critics, please be constructive, specific, and nice! Moderated by gahspidy and mtbbrian.
Featured Photo
Photo by hminx

Photo by hminx
Featured Photo Archive >>
By posting on the Photo Critique forum you agree to post only your own photos, be respectful, and give back as much as you receive. This is a moderated forum and anything abusive or off-topic will be removed.
Results 1 to 4 of 4

Thread: My First Thread

  1. #1
    Junior Member
    Join Date
    May 2004
    Location
    Currently in NYC
    Posts
    2

    My First Thread

    These are a few prints that i developed in my Photography 2 course. I used 400 TMAX and pushed it to 3200 with no flash. I really like high contrast and slightly darker pictures, but when these scanned, they came in alittle darker then the orignal print. This is my first semester doing photography again in 3 years, so please give me all the criticism and advice you might have. Thanks.
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails My First Thread-city.jpg  
    Attached Images Attached Images    

  2. #2
    Moderator of Critiques/Hearder of Cats mtbbrian's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Utah
    Posts
    3,972

    Welcome!

    Welcome to PR.com.
    I hope you learn as much and, hopefully more, from here than you will in school.
    I like the second and fourth shoots the best, they are the more images.
    They do seem a little dark or over over processed or something.
    I look forward to seeing more of your photography.
    Good Luck in school.
    Brian
    My "Personal" Photography Website...
    高手
    My Moderator Bio Page...
    Nikon Samurai #2 - Emeritus
    See more of my photography here...

    “A great photograph is one that fully expresses what one feels, in the deepest sense, about what is being photographed, and is, thereby, a true manifestation of what one feels about life in its entirety...” - Ansel Adams

    "Photography Is An Act Of Life" - Maine 2006

  3. #3
    don't tase me, bro! Asylum Steve's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2003
    Location
    Middle Florida
    Posts
    3,667

    Mud City, and yet...

    Hi,

    It's not a question of light or dark, these pics are basically MUDDY, which means there's no SNAP, or clean contrast...

    That's not a reflection on you as a photographer, but more your processes...

    It's cool you're old school and shoot film, but we need more info to help you. What were your exposures? How exactly did you have this film push processed? Yourself? Or a lab?How was it printed? How was it scanned and digitally processed for the web?

    When you post in Critique you need to give as much shooting and processing info as possible so we know exactly what we're looking at.

    I can tell you, even from viewing these IMPERFECT pics that your eye is GOOD. These shots can be printed much better, so, let us tell you how...


    Quote Originally Posted by Dankster
    These are a few prints that i developed in my Photography 2 course. I used 400 TMAX and pushed it to 3200 with no flash. I really like high contrast and slightly darker pictures, but when these scanned, they came in alittle darker then the orignal print. This is my first semester doing photography again in 3 years, so please give me all the criticism and advice you might have. Thanks.
    "Riding along on a carousel...tryin' to catch up to you..."

    -Steve
    Studio & Lighting - Photography As Art Forum Moderator

    Running the Photo Asylum, Asylum Steve's blogged brain pipes...
    www.stevenpaulhlavac.com
    www.photoasylum.com

  4. #4
    Junior Member
    Join Date
    May 2004
    Location
    Currently in NYC
    Posts
    2

    Reply from Dankster

    Thank you Steve for your comments. I am new to developing my own prints, but ive noticed that pushing film so many stops creates a very grainy picture. Sometimes i think this looks good, but i also think it could as to the 'muddyness' of the photo. I push my film myself, and print it all myself, so the problems are undoubtedly with my technique. I used all high contrast filters for these, between a 3.5 and a 4.5. One of my biggest problems in the darkroom is judging the time the photo should stay in the developer. By the time it reaches what i think i like, it usually come out to dark.

    What are some general causes for muddy prints in the darkroom, and is there anything i can do on the street taking pictures that would help clear these up, because i see this a a running problem in most of my prints.

    Unfortunately, I'm going home to Maine and the darkroom I use is in NYC. So i assume i will have to have my prints dev. at the camera store. Do you think these would have come out the same way then?

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Similar Threads

  1. Hey, what happened to the New York gathering thread?
    By walterick in forum ViewFinder
    Replies: 7
    Last Post: 05-07-2004, 02:32 PM
  2. My First Thread
    By Young Shooter in forum Photo Critique
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 04-26-2004, 05:58 PM
  3. 300D vs. 10D (reply from old board thread)
    By Hatrick in forum Digital Cameras - General
    Replies: 7
    Last Post: 03-01-2004, 08:46 AM
  4. Question about deleting a thread.....
    By Liz in forum Site Feedback
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 02-20-2004, 06:44 AM

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •