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    Too square to be hip. almo's Avatar
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    Mocking Bird on Streetsign

    So what ya'll think?


    I think I need a longer lens.



    http://gallery.photographyreview.com...php?photo=4897


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    Re: Mocking Bird on Streetsign

    Well , as you stated, you could have benefited from a stronger zoom. the bg is also distracting and hides the subject further. Less dof and a longer zoom would have helped here.
    please do not edit and repost my photos


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    Re: Mocking Bird on Streetsign

    Quote Originally Posted by almo
    So what ya'll think?


    I think I need a longer lens.



    http://gallery.photographyreview.com...php?photo=4897


    almo
    I think if you don't have a longer lens, you have to frame the picture differently. I don't know how to do it here, but right now, the picture would seem to be about the street sign. Sort of: "Street Sign with Mockingbird," rather than "Mockingbird on Street Sign." By coincidence, I photographed a mockbird today with a longer lens and will post it soon if you would care to comment.

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    Re: Mocking Bird on Streetsign

    I find the trees to be distracting, and the bird just appears to be engulfed by the sign as well as everything else.
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    Re: Mocking Bird on Streetsign

    Quote Originally Posted by Nina
    I find the trees to be distracting, and the bird just appears to be engulfed by the sign as well as everything else.
    Thanks for the comments guys.


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