Dark clouds gather....

[The Ever Optimist]

This picture was taken from my hostel room in college.... around 6:30 pm
Shot at F2 1/4

Would love any feedback on this!
Thanks
Kunal

[mikehulsebus]

Like the clouds, and especially the enviroment (each patio having its own thing going on) but the bright, pure white areas under the top floor lights are distracting very much from the overall mood.

[havi]

I really like the dramatic lighting. If you feel the lights are too bright, maybe you could try burning them out a tad & repost? Either way, I think it's good!

[dangoettel]

have you tried looking at it with the bottom floor cropped out? just a suggestion

[dangoettel]

actually, forget my last suggestion, i think the photo is more interesting the way you have it

[niteschaos]

I like the proximity of the bright porches to the darkness of the clouds. Keep it as it is.