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    Cans ( inspired by Gary )

    I saw these candy holders and thought of Gary's can series .
    Hope you don't mind me trying your idea Gary .( I couldn't resist the temptation !)
    Would like to know what you think of it .

    Regards
    james
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    Re: Cans ( inspired by Gary )

    Hey James, glad to see you caught the can bug ;) This is nice. I like how you have them laid out ( or found them) composition is good. Only that they are plastic and dont offer any texture, but they make up for that in their cool titles which make it amusing somewhat. Wish I could see a bit more of the bg area they reside, but other than that this has a good pop artsy feel. Good
    please do not edit and repost my photos


    gary


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    Re: Cans ( inspired by Gary )

    Nice adaption of Gary's series. Love the bright yellow, definately works with this pic. I also agree, a little more background would be nice, but overall, great shot.

    Jared

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    Re: Cans ( inspired by Gary )

    I love the yellow as well... coupled with the grey background it works well. And it's fun.

    The only critiques I would offer are 1) it seems a little tilted (just a hair). Could be rotated in the clockwise direction a little bit. 2) I like the offset positioning, but if you kept just a bit more of the left and took a hair off the right... I'm wondering how that might look.

    Great job! Fun!

    -Stew

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