I'd have to say that the softness does bother me. It looks like the door frame is tack sharp, so I feel like her face should be, too. I agree with the previous poster that a version with her eyes sharpened would do wonders for me. Other nit is the brick wall - I would burn it in a little or change it digitally.
Hope this helps.
Rick




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