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Thread: Suggestions?

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    Stop Or I'll Shoot Photography Lori11's Avatar
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    Suggestions?

    THis is mother and baby (and baby lol) What do you think? I am learning "people" and want to improve
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    Re: Suggestions?

    The first has compositional problems to me with legs and hands being chopped off. Would look better vertical.
    Some of the more skilled will tell you about light problems I suppose but the second shot had great composition to me and the third has REALLY GREAT composiiton.
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    Re: Suggestions?

    Thanks! The first one was cropped that way ( I will try to fix the hands) due to the way she had to sit, she is due in 3 weeks so everything is an effort for her lol I will go work on redoing the crop though ty

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    Re: Suggestions?

    Nice shots, but I think the last 2 are begging for a little fill flash. Then again, what do I know? I shoot birds.
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    Re: Suggestions?

    I dont flash my clients, even if they beg :lol: Heck, I shoot bikes, so what do I know LOL

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    Re: Suggestions?

    Nice shots! :thumbsup: The one thing that I would like to see changed is a different angle on #2 & #3 so that it wouldn't look like that plant in the back ground was growing out of their heads. Any time you take a picture indoors or out you need to be aware of what else is in the picture, especially behind and over the subjects heads, Jeff
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