John, here's my quick reply....

They look bored to death. And the appearance of boredom pretty much sucks all the goodness out of your goal (making them look trashy).

Is it just the lighting you want critique for? if so, I apologize......but I've at least given you my first reaction. I like the lighting but don't know why....I know that's an awful critique but like Steve said above .... that's my 2 cents

Hope this helps, and can't wait to see the imprvoed version.

I'd love to see some hispanic women wearing those mamacita shirts! Any chance of that?

Trevor