Photo Critique Forum

Please post no more than five images a day and respond to as many images as you post. Critics, please be constructive, specific, and nice! Moderated by gahspidy and mtbbrian.
Featured Photo
Photo by hminx

Photo by hminx
Featured Photo Archive >>
By posting on the Photo Critique forum you agree to post only your own photos, be respectful, and give back as much as you receive. This is a moderated forum and anything abusive or off-topic will be removed.
Results 1 to 6 of 6
  1. #1
    learning
    Join Date
    Jul 2004
    Location
    boulder CO
    Posts
    93

    moody: part duex

    still just playing with negative space.... any comments appreciated
    Attached Images Attached Images  

  2. #2
    is back jar_e's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2005
    Location
    Calgary, Alberta
    Posts
    3,264

    Re: moody: part duex

    Hmmm, interesting shot. I think I would've off centered the subject a little more, not having it dead centre. I think if you put it more to the left you would have a more effective shot. Nice texture too,

    Jared

  3. #3
    mod squad gahspidy's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2004
    Location
    N.Y. U.S.A.
    Posts
    8,368

    Re: moody: part duex

    interesting, but i don't feel there is enough evidence of what it is we are looking at. Is this a close up of a cork? The whole concept seems to have alot of potential,, but right now there is not enough to hold interest.
    please do not edit and repost my photos


    gary


  4. #4
    Senior Member OldSchool's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2003
    Location
    Portland, OR
    Posts
    1,421

    Re: moody: part duex

    I agree. The subject needs to be a bit stronger to grab ya.

  5. #5
    is back jar_e's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2005
    Location
    Calgary, Alberta
    Posts
    3,264

    Re: moody: part duex

    Quote Originally Posted by gahspidy
    interesting, but i don't feel there is enough evidence of what it is we are looking at. Is this a close up of a cork? The whole concept seems to have alot of potential,, but right now there is not enough to hold interest.
    I originally thought it was the side of a tree.

  6. #6
    learning
    Join Date
    Jul 2004
    Location
    boulder CO
    Posts
    93

    Re: moody: part duex

    jar-e wins the "guess this object" game!
    Thanks for the imput...i may try to reshoot tonight. Do you think mabey a slightly tighter crop would work?

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Similar Threads

  1. Part Colourising
    By plchung in forum Photo Critique
    Replies: 6
    Last Post: 01-11-2005, 07:08 PM
  2. Canon Powershot A75 loose part? help!
    By zerocool1 in forum Digital Cameras - General
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 12-02-2004, 11:45 AM
  3. Capitol Reef Fremont Gorge hike part 2
    By Iguanamom in forum Photo Critique
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 10-11-2004, 04:24 PM
  4. New here and new to photography for the most part.
    By dropFROG in forum Photo Critique
    Replies: 9
    Last Post: 07-21-2004, 02:49 PM
  5. Fuji GA645Zi bent part inside ??
    By Beavis in forum Help Files
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 03-25-2004, 09:12 PM

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •