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    After Meal, Before Work

    Hi All,
    The shot was taken at Kyoto Station. Welcome your comments.
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    Re: After Meal, Before Work

    Nice job. I really like how the guy on the left side of the sculpture looks all excited and ready to do something and the guy on the right side looks tired and ready to go home.

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    Re: After Meal, Before Work

    Yoyo, again your titles make great images even greater.

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    Re: After Meal, Before Work

    What great architecture and well captured.

    I love the colours here and as tony pointed out the different poses of the people in the shot.

    My only concern is the angles of everything don't seem right and I cannot pinpoint where you took the photo from or the angle of the camera. It looks like the building is built on a slope hence the angles whereas the floor is level, weired.

    Nicely done though - can you give a hint on the angles?
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    Re: After Meal, Before Work

    Hi Tony, Thanks for the analysis of the shot and the kind words.

    Hi payn, Thanks for the appreciation as always.

    Hi Roger, The floor should be level. The metal frames are curved abd wrapping the outside of the station. I am not sure the weird perspective is due to camera distortion. Thank for pointing that out.

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    Re: After Meal, Before Work

    Quote Originally Posted by Yoyo Szeto
    Hi Roger, The floor should be level. The metal frames are curved abd wrapping the outside of the station.

    yoyo

    Yoyo,

    Thanks for the explanation, No the floor is level its just it hadn't twigged in my old grey cells that the walls were curved which would explain the angles.

    Still think its a good shot.

    Just noticed the photo you took of the coloured items in the entrance. Work just gets in the way of Photography at the moment.
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