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    Re: Urban dawn

    Many thanks for the replies and glad you like it. Interesting that you guys mentioned the tighter crop as I agree. Forgot to post this version which I prefer. It focusses the image on what matters, which for me is the geometry in the buildings. Many have mentioned light trails, but I literally clicked and ran. No time for trails!!! May go back with a bodyguard.


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    Re: Urban dawn

    Interesting composition. I would lighten the area in the right lower foreground a bit if possible. The eye is drawn there and the lack of detail disappoints. But I’ll quickly add that may be due to the reduction.

    Also, any chance of seeing this in color?

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    Re: Urban dawn

    Quote Originally Posted by Justan View Post
    Interesting composition. I would lighten the area in the right lower foreground a bit if possible. The eye is drawn there and the lack of detail disappoints. But I’ll quickly add that may be due to the reduction.

    Also, any chance of seeing this in color?
    it was shot in awful orange sodium lighting so i converted to mono in raw i am afraid. don't often keep raw files once i have a happy result as it just gets messy on my pc.

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    Re: Urban dawn

    Quote Originally Posted by baldemort View Post
    Many thanks for the replies and glad you like it. Interesting that you guys mentioned the tighter crop as I agree. Forgot to post this version which I prefer. It focusses the image on what matters, which for me is the geometry in the buildings. Many have mentioned light trails, but I literally clicked and ran. No time for trails!!! May go back with a bodyguard.

    Nice capture

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    Re: Urban dawn

    Quote Originally Posted by Neous View Post
    Nice capture
    many thanks. glad you like it!

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