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Interesting composition. I would lighten the area in the right lower foreground a bit if possible. The eye is drawn there and the lack of detail disappoints. But I’ll quickly add that may be due to the reduction.
Also, any chance of seeing this in color?
it was shot in awful orange sodium lighting so i converted to mono in raw i am afraid. don't often keep raw files once i have a happy result as it just gets messy on my pc.