Under an Elevator

[Yoyo Szeto]

Does the composition work?
yoyo

[almo]

Simply put, I like it.

BTW we call that an escalator in the states.

[jar_e]

I agree with almo, nice shot. Everything just seems to work for me.

Love your black and white stuff,

Jared

[Yoyo Szeto]

Hi Almo and Jared,
Thanks for the kind words. I am not sure about the positions of the passers-by.
All the best.
yoyo

[OldSchool]

Hey Yoyo,

What are you standing on to get the angle? What I really like about this concept is the interaction of the lines (store fronts, stairs, escalator, ...). Very intriguing....

However, I find the right third a tad busy and tried a crop (attached). Too bad that "carpet" sign is there. Maybe you can move forward a little so the sign is not so prominent.

BR,
Tim

[Yoyo Szeto]

Hi Tim,
Thanks for the helpful comments.I was standing on another flight of stairs when taking this shot.
yoyo

[Chunk]

I think I like the sign on the left cropped out on this one as it is a nearby in focus attention grabber. The passersby might be better if the were spread from front to back more rather than being on the same plane. It's a very interesting shot with a lot to look at and an interesting variation of light.
Nice work.