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    elevator girl/going up pt.2

    yeah well...don`t all react at once or my computer will implode..zzzzzzzzz...but hey whatever...looking for an opinion on this shot in my elevator girl series..greets from a sunny europe..getting bigger tomorrow by the way..by about 74 million..
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    Hey Picjunk

    Interesting lighting, the hair's a bit underexposed, fill flash might have ruined it though Im not sure. This pic would be better with the rest of the photos in the series but I couldnt find them. Maybe you could post them all under one topic as replies? It might attract a bit more interest too

    I know how you feel about not getting replies but sometimes nobody has time to reply dont take it personally. When I get time to reply I normally reply to photos with no comments so hopefully somebody will do the same thing for mine

    Thanks for sharing

    -Toby McFadden

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    I can`t comment on its merits in context as i`ve not seen the series. What I will comment on is the stylized approach you have taken which I like very much. Being a product of the 60`s and 70`s myself there is a definite identification there. The make up it spot on as is the lighting. The shafts of blue light and the slight blowing out is very reminiscent of 60`s album covers....think Joni Mitchell, Patty Smith etc.

    My only gripe is the pose as I would have liked to have seen more of the models face and something slightly more expressive in keeping with the style you have chosen. Hope that makes sense.

    Well Done.

    From Fczwiniew Popozxckwinichk (From Poland now living in Brighton, England, as from the 1st may).

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    Did you get her number?




    Seriously, I like everything except the lighting on the left side of the frame. It's a little too blown out / bright for my taste, although I can see the look you were going for. I might've just stood a bit further to your left and captured her profile from a slightly different angle. That would've cut out a bit of the extra light but still given you a very similar look.
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