Tail light on white

[hminx]

Not a selective colour just tail light against white car on a bright day

[arne saknussen]

I really like the lines you found, reminds me of a Picasso. The tail lights provide just the right amount of color. I do wish the top curve was more prevalent and that there was more room on the right. But still visually striking.

[hminx]

Thanks Arne the suns position caused the top curve to be a little obscure, I tried to ps a bit of shade in there to high light the curve a bit more but it came out a bit too obvious so I left it as is.

[mattb]

I really like the line from upper right to lower left. I like the concept too, with something we all know looked at in a different way. I kind of wish the light wasn't so centered in the frame but I can see how it would need to be to make those nice lines work like that. Over all a good shot!

[wfooshee]

I would crop out the upper portion where the line disappears, just get rid of it.

[hminx]

Thanks mattb and wfooshee, I considered cropping the image near that point but I preferred the line moving corner to corner even though it becomes a little vague at times.

[GB1]

I like its abstract feeling. I also like the amount of negative space it has.

Some suggestions:

- Remove that groove (metal deformation?) running vertically right below the lower light. Just clone it to be smooth.
- I'm OK with the dark like (slit), but want it to be consistent throughout, if possible. It starts disappearing at the top, really hurting the clean, abstract feeling.
- Process here and there to clean up the small imperfections in the reflections, etc. I think this is a good way to go w/ this image because abstractness is what it's all about, so you don't want to draw the viewer's attention away will little stuff.

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[Linkontrance]

Someone suggested to me to white out my tail lights, I personally think it would be sweet. Does any body have any pics of 1g eclipses with

[hminx]

Thanks Greg had a play with your suggestions in PS and the crease removal went ok but extending the black curve to the top right corner proved a bit problematic in getting something that didn't look obviously added. Will try to reply in a less tardy fashion next time.

[Greg McCary]

Congrats on the feature. This is a very nice image. I have nothing to add that would improve it.