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    summer portrait

    Would you think thid photo portray's the summer effectively?Comments welcomed.
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    Re: summer portrait

    Quote Originally Posted by Piet
    Would you think thid photo portray's the summer effectively?Comments welcomed.
    Piet
    Hey. This is much much too dark. I had a very quick play in Photoshop, hope you don't mind. I like this cheeky photo, although I'm not sure it's quite summer? Less tighter crop maybe?

    Cheers,
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    Re: summer portrait

    Even if I say so myself the difference between the two photos is remarkable. I'd recolour his teeth to white if I had more time, and maybe tone down the contrast on his tongue a little and possibly reduce the reds in the image to make him look a little less sunburnt. All personal taste of course!
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    Re: summer portrait

    Thanks man,
    I have to admit you are so right.
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