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Thread: Street scene

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    Street scene

    The building pretty much say it all... I was caught by the light but I am unsure about the picture as a whole.

    Any comment/suggestion would be greatly appreciated.

    Seb
    Last edited by Seb; 04-08-2010 at 10:47 PM.

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    Re: Street scene

    This is not bad, Seb. I do like the lighting and the person in the doorway is a good element . Something I don't feel right about here though. I think I would have liked to see you shoot this standing more to your right so the the sign post is not interfering with the doorway and lines. And also not cutting into the flag. By moving over it would have placed the post more to the left and out of the doorway for a cleaner composition.
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    Re: Street scene

    I agree with Gary's angle. The street pole is a nice addition, yet it's too head on for me.

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