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    Shadows

    Chimps at play late in the evening.Comments welcome.
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    Re: Shadows

    Bobby, interesting scene. I don't see anything like that where I live unless I go to the zoo.
    The time of day here, dusk, has the sky still light but the ground very dark. Also I think you have included too much in the scene. If it were not for you saying these were chimps in the trees, I would not have known. I think if you crop the image from the left up to the tree the chimps are in, and try to bring out a little more detail and light in the foreground, you would improve this alot.
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    Re: Shadows

    I think Gary hit it dead on. There's just not enough detail to know what you're looking at.
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    Re: Shadows

    Quote Originally Posted by gahspidy
    Bobby, interesting scene. I don't see anything like that where I live unless I go to the zoo.
    The time of day here, dusk, has the sky still light but the ground very dark. Also I think you have included too much in the scene. If it were not for you saying these were chimps in the trees, I would not have known. I think if you crop the image from the left up to the tree the chimps are in, and try to bring out a little more detail and light in the foreground, you would improve this alot.
    Already done, was not sure which to post.Originally tried to do this as a sllhoutte.Thanks for comments.
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