Park Trip

[Bobfinchley]

I got this shot on a day out with two of my friends, I thought it captured the mood of their relationship really well. I would have liked to get more of the bushes as I think they add a special texture to the shot as a whole. Also I feel the shot is poinient because of the possitioning of the wheelchair and the double yellow lines hinting at the barriers which disability can throw up against people. Please let me know if you have any comments about this image and how I can possible improve my skills.

[CarbonTerry]

Nice shot of your friends. They are both looking to camera right and you have them framed to the right. This adds (to me) a visual tension that is distracting. A little more air (room) to the right and a tighter crop on the left might (?) work better. For the yellow lines to be significant they need to be a bigger portion of the pix. They are barely noticeable.
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