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    "The Light"

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    Re: "The Light"

    I like this photo and the overall tone to it. Technically I think you did a very good job, nice dof and exposure.
    The one thing I would fix on this photo is the plant. I like the one branch going into the light and the angle that was captured, but having the bottom of the plant (larger leaves) ruins the simple feel of the photo. I think it would have been much stronger without that included and it would not be as distracting.
    Still a good photo that has a nice zen feeling.
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    Re: "The Light"

    Good point about the big leaves. I was so fixed on the small part of the plant that the big ones never really registered in my head. Thanks for the critique!

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