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    Kids in the Park

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    Re: Kids in the Park

    It looks like they are about to explode all over the park again. Good shot of some kids who've been having fun together tolerating an adult for a few moments. The bandage over the eye adds a lot.

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    Re: Kids in the Park

    Not bad, they look like a fun bunch. It appears a bit too dark and contrasty to me, but that might not be a bad thing in this shot. The bg, especially the white bag on the bench is distracting. I think it would have also been more effective had the youngest been standing next to one of the other boys ( while holding his hand if nee be ) with no adult in the scene at all.
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    Re: Kids in the Park

    I have to agree with the comment regarding the youngest one in the group. Had he been standing as part of "the gang" it would have seemed more natural.
    But for a spontaneous staged shot (oxymoron?) it's quite nice.
    Jon

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