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    Flow - HDR Series



    All feedback appreciated! Positive, negative, I appreciate them all.
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    Re: Flow - HDR Series

    very cool! I like how the clouds show some motion in the same direction also. To me there is a weird thing in the center of the clouds. it looks like there was a small air craft like a blimp there. I really like the ghost but IMO, the black car is too bright in the passenger side window. just some nit picks that draw my attention away from this great photograph.
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    Re: Flow - HDR Series

    I noticed the UFO in the clouds as well. The lights streaks could be toned down a bit, but overall I like it, especially in B&W!
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    Re: Flow - HDR Series

    I thought the headlight flare up in the clouds was distracting.
    Wondered where the UFO was then thought you meant the same thing I was seeing?
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    Re: Flow - HDR Series

    Excellent perspective and love the movement in the sky.
    I agree about getting rid of the UFO, or more likely as Paul stated the headlight reflections in the cloud.

    I would try to burn back some of the side of the black car where the moving cars headlights seemed to have kept hitting it and blew it out some.

    Love the blur and backlighting. Excellent in B&W too, although i have a feeling it would look as good with the color as some of your others.
    please do not edit and repost my photos


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    Re: Flow - HDR Series

    Marco, That's not an aircraft but lens flare lol. thanks for the feedback, I'll fix the car.

    guzziknight, thank you, I tried to tone down the light streeks already, not sure if I can go any further without introducing unsightly greyness to it.

    Paul, you're right, it's the flare. not a UFO. although a UFO would've been cool ;)

    Gary, thanks for the feedback, here's an edited version.

    Alsoo corrected the perspective a bit more since I went back to the original anyways.

    thanks guys.

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    Re: Flow - HDR Series

    Better, very good.
    I have to say that i find the space between frame and window on left more appealing when left in before correcting perspective, The perspective correction really didn't seem to offer any benefits, imo.
    Either way, it looks great really.
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    Re: Flow - HDR Series

    Now that is cool. I have had nightmares that look like this.

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