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    first long exposure - waterfall

    Just trying to get the effect right, the compposition is off, and it isn't a great location. It is just practice for later. Does the water blur effect work in this shot?

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    Re: first long exposure - waterfall

    I think you did a very nice job with the blur in this shot. Keep it up!
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    Re: first long exposure - waterfall

    You know, when I'm going for a blurred water effect I won't shoot at a faster shutter speed than 1/4. And even then it's pushing it. I prefer to use at least one second, and the norm for me is 2-4 seconds. This means small apertures and dim shooting conditions.
    This shot looks overexposed to me, which is always a danger with moving water. The white areas tend to blow out with brighter exposures. Wait for early morning on an overcast day, shoot ISO100 or lower, small aperture, shutter 1-4 seconds, and bracket to a stop or so. All my best waterfall images use this combination. Take it from me, I'm a waterfall junkie. Have fun!
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    Re: first long exposure - waterfall

    Quote Originally Posted by Outdoorsman
    You know, when I'm going for a blurred water effect I won't shoot at a faster shutter speed than 1/4. And even then it's pushing it. I prefer to use at least one second, and the norm for me is 2-4 seconds. This means small apertures and dim shooting conditions.
    This shot looks overexposed to me, which is always a danger with moving water. The white areas tend to blow out with brighter exposures. Wait for early morning on an overcast day, shoot ISO100 or lower, small aperture, shutter 1-4 seconds, and bracket to a stop or so. All my best waterfall images use this combination. Take it from me, I'm a waterfall junkie. Have fun!
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    This was actually overcast, and early morning, lol. I used -2.? on exposure. So, I should use maybe a F8 (smallest aperture I have) and -4 exposure @ 1 sec? I did another one at one sec with no compensation and at f6.7, and the WHOL:E photo was white, lol.

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    Re: first long exposure - waterfall

    Thanks MJ. I was happy considering this was my first attempt, and didn't have a tripod with me.

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    Re: first long exposure - waterfall

    Hey not bad without a tripod. I do like how the rock wall on the left frames the shot and forces the viewer to look at the water fall.

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    Re: first long exposure - waterfall

    Thanks Chris. I couldn't get the whole thing because a friend was sitting on the side, and refused to move! Shoulda slapped him.

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    Re: first long exposure - waterfall

    Quote Originally Posted by payn817
    This was actually overcast, and early morning, lol. I used -2.? on exposure. So, I should use maybe a F8 (smallest aperture I have) and -4 exposure @ 1 sec? I did another one at one sec with no compensation and at f6.7, and the WHOL:E photo was white, lol.
    Aaaah. I see. I assumed you were using an SLR. With an SLR you would be able to use a smaller aperture, which will in turn give you the slower shutter you need. This was a hard reality I had to face when I first tried doing a waterfall with a P&S digi. The aperture was also limited to f/8, and so it meant that waterfalls were no longer as doable as I was used to.
    Unfortunately, underexposing would give you a faster shutter at f/8, which is the opposite of what you want. Overexposing will give you a slower shutter, but it will also cause the "white out" you mentioned.
    So the solution would be to wait for the light to get low enough to get that slow shutter without overexposing. Or you could use an ND filter. A polarizer would also cut down on light, so that's an option. If you can get either one for your camera, that is...
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    Re: first long exposure - waterfall

    i like it, great first waterfall pic, keep it up

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    Re: first long exposure - waterfall

    Payn this may help you in your quest for magical water hehe.

    http://www.outbackphoto.com/DigitalC...001/essay.html

    Scroll down on this page it may give you a good way to acheive what your trying to do here , hope it helps

    PS i offer no critique to this one reason being that i have never attempted such a photo
    Last edited by Knight; 07-27-2005 at 04:33 PM. Reason: Spelling and theres still more lol

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    Re: first long exposure - waterfall

    Thanks moonspell.

    Knight! Me, cheat?? Never! No, seriously, I think that was a nice effect he produced there, and a new take on an old idea perhaps. What i was trying to do was have that traditional blur in the movement of the water. I did acheive the effect to some extent, and it seems a matter of personal taste as to how well it was acheived.

    There seems to be alot of discussion on the ability of a "p&s" vs a DSLR. The Kodak system I use is actually more reffered to as a pro-sumer. I need to justify spending $1000+ for a dslr before getting one. So, I am trying "traditional" techniques to see if I can produce results. If I can, and if my style requires it, then I will spend the money. However, first, I must understand things like aperture, focal lengths, and shutter speed (not to mention find my niche).

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