City Landscape

[Yoyo Szeto]

Hi All,
This is a second shooting of a pic I posted before. The pic was taken with a panaramic camera. Plese criticise.
yoyo

[Young Shooter]

Its an interesting picture, the fingure give a feel, but this picture isnt doing anything for me, mabey the fact that i cant see the rest of the buildings, the picture kinda ends where u want to see, but the contrast in the black and white is quite nice

[bpcomp]

Well first I must say I really like this picture. I love city scapes like this. Now for suggestions, I think your strongest viual element is also your weekness. The hand pointing and the wall it is on dominates the picture frame to much. It takes more than a third of the frame and I don't fell it deserves that kind of screen space. One thing to try would to be to move the camera closer to that wall and force the perspective more. Now don't get me wrong, I love the dicotomy between all the horizontal and vertical lines on the one side and the slanted lines and curves on the other. I just think to really make a statment your left side needs to be forshortened some more.

Keep up the good work.