Quote Originally Posted by Loupey
I would crop tighter to eliminate the two boys on the left - since they are looking in the cameras general direction, my eyes tend to move away from your intended target.

The subject looks more "mischievious" than bored. Something with his posture. Nothing you could have done. Keep on shooting.
I thought about that but when I covered the two boys on the left the subject had to compete with the lady's big white bright jacket. Maybe if they were more blurry, they could say in the shot?

Was chopping his fingers a big no no?

I only got one shot in since I was trying ot be sneaky.

One of my first attempts in shooting strangers unknowingly.

Thanks for looking it over.