View Full Version : Generally shy away from this


AntLockyer
12-01-2005, 01:52 PM
but I thought I'd put this pic up for Critique, say what you feel please, I understand it will not be to everyones taste, thanks for looking.



http://antonyl.brinkster.net/antlockyer/crpr1.jpg

ChowChi-Ching
12-01-2005, 02:03 PM
I feel this picture has potential, although I feel it is lacking a specific subject. I find myself looking for what I am supposed to be looking at. I do like the DOF though and think that you could probably have alot of fun in this kind of area. Not sure if this helps at all.

AntLockyer
12-01-2005, 02:07 PM
Thanks for the reply, I wont comment on the subject but I'm glad the DOF stood out as thats what a lot of my current stuff is about.

Seb
12-01-2005, 04:01 PM
but I thought I'd put this pic up for Critique, say what you feel please, I understand it will not be to everyones taste, thanks for looking.


It works for me. In fact, I'd say that this is quite brilliant. I love how you worked the diagonals and framed this.

Seb

readingr
12-02-2005, 05:58 AM
I like the dark dispair, emptiness, lonelyness that you captured here, which is enforced by the patterns and the lonely light.

Good one.

Roger

dbutler
12-02-2005, 07:07 AM
I like it too. I like the way the rectangles are reflected first vertically, then horizontally, then vertically, etc. Very cool.