More general C&C please

[Tyson L. Sparks]

[Greg McCary]

I think Brent had it. A little flash fill is all that is needed here. The poses and setting are very nice. Try and get a PS crash course from Alison and you are good to go. The lighting is a little harsh on her forehead and shoulder on #3, but I see you getting better with every post.
Greg

[Xia_Ke]

These are great Tyson. Showing some great improvement. Keep up the good work

[Frog]

I can offer no advice but thanks for sharing and asking as when I break down and try some portraits I'll know what to look for.

[livin4lax09]

these are definitely getting better tyson, the poses and expressions are improving enormously. If you don't mind, I'd like to see one of your original images, straight out of camera. I just want to see what they look like before you process them. It's entirely up to you, but if you would like to, and see what I would do with it, send it to me at livin4lax09 (@) comcast.net

[mn shutterbug]

Looking good.