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    Concrete

    One from Saturday.

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    Re: Concrete

    Great background. You may prefer it but I would crop the top just under the white thing at top left.
    The couple are perfectly posed.
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    Re: Concrete

    What a great shot! I agree with Frog. Are there more?

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    Re: Concrete

    Thanks guys. I agree about the spot in the upper left. I fixed it and here's a possible presentation we might go with.

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    Re: Concrete

    Beautiful! They will love it!

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    That's nice!
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    Re: Concrete

    Thanks guys.
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    Re: Concrete

    Outstanding, Seb
    I love the subtle color in the wall as it compliments the bouquet.
    The presentation should go over quite well. Looks like three video clip stills matted and presented quite elegantly.
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    Re: Concrete

    Me likey! How's it look in b&w?
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    Re: Concrete

    Nice work,Seb
    Great color.

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    Re: Concrete

    Thanks guys!

    Walterick,

    I am not a fan of it in color, gets too "noisy" with all the textures.
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    Re: Concrete

    Quote Originally Posted by Sebastian
    here's a possible presentation we might go with...
    Well, great sequence (and you know how I love shots in sequence) and great wall (and you know how I love industrial settings), but I think the splotches at the tops of these shots really distract from the people and what they're doing.

    If it were me, I'd crop that top part out completely...
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    Re: Concrete

    Quote Originally Posted by Sebastian

    I am not a fan of it in color, gets too "noisy" with all the textures.
    You mean black and white?
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    Re: Concrete

    Quote Originally Posted by walterick
    You mean black and white?
    Why of course!

    Steve,

    Thanks for commenting. The splotches don't distract me, and I really like the subtle top frame they create. I don't know. It somehow works for me.
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    Re: Concrete

    Interesting shot and certainly out of the norm, especially for wedding pics. If you like it, the b&g like it, you've obviously got a winner.

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