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    Zagreb park in Spring

    I am little torn about this one ...I tend to like it ....what do you think?
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    Re: Zagreb park in Spring

    I like the B&W application, nice contrasts. I wish that the two most prominent figures were a bit lighter showing some detail. The head of the figure on the right is lost in the black of the distant doorway. I also like the way the trees lean, adds interest to the image.

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    Re: Zagreb park in Spring

    Clone the area around the gents head so he would not get lost in the background. At first I thought you should crop out the tree on the left but I think it would hurt the composition but I do wish it was sharper.
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    Re: Zagreb park in Spring

    Good job on the B&W

    I do not have additional comments to what has already been mentioned

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    Re: Zagreb park in Spring

    Nice! Love the sense of depth - agreed the head getting lost in the background is a little annoying, but nice shot! Nice B/W conversion too!

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    Re: Zagreb park in Spring

    Nice b&w, great scene. I agree with Greg about the guy's head being lost. I like it overall.
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