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    Double Vision B&W

    I have had this photo on the back burner for a couple months. I made some tonal changes a I think its now growing on me...or maybe I have just been looking at it for too long Any critiques appreciated as always.

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    Re: Double Vision B&W

    Looks kinda flat to me. The tree looks lost in this picture among all the space. Maybe if you cropped some off the top and both sides it would make the tree a little more predominate and give us something to look at besides the two hills in the background, Jeff
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    Re: Double Vision B&W

    Thanks for the critique Jeff. I was thinking that myself. Back to tthe drawing board.
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    Re: Double Vision B&W

    To me, the flatness is one thing. But I think the two hills apexing at the same spot is generally not as aesthetic as another geometric arrangement. Alas, it is interesting how the tree is at the same spot (I assume you positioned yourself to capture that ... ).

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