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    He Has a Vision. What is Yours?

    Just back from a trip in Tokyo. The shot was taken at Roppongi Hills. The far tower is Tokyo Tower. Welcome your views.
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    Re: He Has a Vision. What is Yours?

    This looks to be a good point of view. Something is just not looking right to me, and I think it is the lack of adequate sharpness to bring out the seperation between the buildings and provide those crisp details that an image like this would benefit from. Overall, I wouls say it is still a very nice image.
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    Re: He Has a Vision. What is Yours?

    I agree with Gary Yoyo.
    On first sight I thought the buildings in the lower part were reflections. I still think they look a bit like that although obviously they are not.
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    Re: He Has a Vision. What is Yours?

    Though I love your titles yo yo, I think the silhouette would have to be sharper and more crisp to make this effective. I love the idea, just maybe a little sharpening of the silhouettes.

    Well done,

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    Re: He Has a Vision. What is Yours?

    This shot has potential. The way the tower stands out against the cityscape is the strong point. Like others have mentioned, it is not as sharp as it could be. But what gets me a little is the big black empty area at the bottom of the frame... seems like the 'bad part of town.' I tried cropping it but it doesn't quite work. Maybe a horizontal format would have been better in this situation. Watch that camera shake. - GB

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