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    I got Draganized...

    As part of my learning curve with the Dragan effect and as a follow up from this thread My Father

    This time I used a different subject...me! and a different approach, this time trying to correct some of the flaws and making the output some more...digestible.
    You know the drill...shoot C&C, it will be appreciated :thumbsup:
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    Re: I got Draganized...

    A little more grit and grunge?
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    Re: I got Draganized...

    I like this shot a lot. I think it's much closer to the Dragan effect you were originally going for. Dodging out around the hairline was a good choice for separating the subject (you) from the background and really makes things pop off the screen. This also has an uncanny resemblance to some of DrayMorton's work from earlier in the year. <compliment

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    Re: I got Draganized...

    Great work, once again. Additional sharpness needed, though.

    EDIT: I agree with frog. First one is better. Second looks overdone/tonemapped to me.

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    Re: I got Draganized...

    Looks great to me.
    I prefer the first one.
    Keep Shooting!

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    Re: I got Draganized...

    Good job. Your expression here is well suited for the effect, I think.
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    Re: I got Draganized...

    Nice work, Rob. I also prefer the first one. Looks a bit more natural in a good way. I like the light and composition. Good expression as well.
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    Re: I got Draganized...

    Congrats, man! Well-deserved. Add some sharpening to the top one and you're set. I never mentioned it, but the pose and expression are absolutely perfect for this kind of work.

    Seems like you're well on your way to becoming a genuine descendent of the great Dragoon! :P

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    Re: I got Draganized...

    Marvellous work, I am really impressed, well done.
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    Re: I got Draganized...

    WooHoo -- now ya got "sticky-ized!" Congrats! Now's my chance to also comment on how cool the effect is on your shirt also.
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    Re: I got Draganized...

    Quote Originally Posted by jetrim
    I like this shot a lot. I think it's much closer to the Dragan effect you were originally going for. Dodging out around the hairline was a good choice for separating the subject (you) from the background and really makes things pop off the screen. This also has an uncanny resemblance to some of DrayMorton's work from earlier in the year. <compliment
    Thanks a lot Jetrim for the comments and compliment :thumbsup: I`m much more satisfied with the result compared to my first attempt, tho I`m aiming for something much more "crispier" unfortunately I took this myself and was hard to focus and pose ( I need to buy a remote control) and the original file is a bit out of focus (blurred)
    Regarding the background that was the harder part...the original background was my living room wall which is some sort of cream color. I found out that the best way to go was trim the subject and remove the background and paint it black and with some burn at the edges did the trick of merging me with the darkness.

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    Re: I got Draganized...

    Quote Originally Posted by draymorton
    Great work, once again. Additional sharpness needed, though.

    EDIT: I agree with frog. First one is better. Second looks overdone/tonemapped to me.
    Thanks Dray! I will add some sharpness as suggested and upload the result ;)

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    Re: I got Draganized...

    Quote Originally Posted by Frog
    Looks great to me.
    I prefer the first one.
    Thanks Señor Frog...first one it is then

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    Re: I got Draganized...

    Quote Originally Posted by Shebang
    Good job. Your expression here is well suited for the effect, I think.
    Thanks! Not bad for my first modeling session

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    Re: I got Draganized...

    Quote Originally Posted by gahspidy
    Nice work, Rob. I also prefer the first one. Looks a bit more natural in a good way. I like the light and composition. Good expression as well.
    Thanks a lot Gahspidy...agreed the first one is more what I`m aiming at

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    Re: I got Draganized...

    Quote Originally Posted by draymorton
    Congrats, man! Well-deserved. Add some sharpening to the top one and you're set. I never mentioned it, but the pose and expression are absolutely perfect for this kind of work.

    Seems like you're well on your way to becoming a genuine descendent of the great Dragoon! :P
    Wow! thanks again for the kind comments Dray...really motivating! :thumbsup:

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    Re: I got Draganized...

    Quote Originally Posted by shootme
    Marvellous work, I am really impressed, well done.
    Thanks a lot! :blush2:

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    Re: I got Draganized...

    Quote Originally Posted by Shebang
    WooHoo -- now ya got "sticky-ized!" Congrats! Now's my chance to also comment on how cool the effect is on your shirt also.

    :yikes: :23: My first sticky cool! Yeap! Fabrics really pop out with this sort of treatment:thumbsup:
    Thanks again for your comments Shebang!

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    Re: I got Draganized...

    A whisker more sharpness in search for perfection
    How does this looks... Enough? Hey! you over did it? Men! you need to crank the sharpness?
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    Re: I got Draganized...

    Yea, way to go. Nice.
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    Re: I got Draganized...

    wow , excellent work!

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    Re: I got Draganized...

    I can't really tell a lot of difference, but I think I prefer your latest.
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    Re: I got Draganized...

    Quote Originally Posted by shootme
    Yea, way to go. Nice.
    Thank you kind Sir

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    Re: I got Draganized...

    Quote Originally Posted by armando_m
    wow , excellent work!
    Thanks Armando :thumbsup:

    Salu2

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    Re: I got Draganized...

    Quote Originally Posted by BlueRob
    Hey! you over did it? Men! you need to crank the sharpness?
    LOL I think you hit it perfectly.

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