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    The Confluence.. and Pano-Any Better?

    After my last blown attempt at this scene I had time to re-shoot it today. The white fluffy clouds in the deep blue sky along with the tallest bridge in California made for an interesting picture. I am starting to figure out the exposure problems I have been having in the past..at least I think I am, you tell me. I shot these Raw and did no editing to them. There not as sharp as I wanted, but the wind blowing at 30mph didn't help once again. Any opinions,critiques good or bad are always appreciated. All EXIF data is there. I also posted a link to the high res full format picture that you can zoom in on.
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    Re: The Confluence.. and Pano-Any Better?

    Ouch. I just realized there is major stitch line in the Pano..Gonna have to fix that one. Do you see it?

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    Re: The Confluence.. and Pano-Any Better?

    My guess is the first one at the right end of the bridge, for the stitch line. I like the second one the best and think having the bridge in the foreground gives a little prospective of the scene and adds to the composition, Jeff
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    Re: The Confluence.. and Pano-Any Better?

    The stitching error may just be a glitch, but this could help: http://wiki.panotools.org/Entrance_Pupil_Database. I made a pano head with those specs out of two Manfrotto super clamps and a length of PVC. I then measured and marked my nodal point on the PVC (with a 0 mark) for different lenses/zoom lengths. The front clamp sits at 0 and screws into my tripod. The back clamp sits at the proper distance away from the rotational point and my camera screws onto it.

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    Re: The Confluence.. and Pano-Any Better?

    I spot the stitch error on the right by seeing the horizontal lines of the bridge not being aligned but probably wouldn't have noticed if you hadn't pointed it out.
    I think you have some sensor dust.
    There's a smudge under the bridge on left just in front of the cloud.
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    Re: The Confluence.. and Pano-Any Better?

    Thanks for the tips and reply's.

    Grandpaw you got it. I don't know how I originally missed that, but I did.

    caleb thanks for that link. I just learned a ton of great info from that sight. Much appreciated. I do alot of stitching and this is the first time it has happened using Microsoft Ice. I just re-stitched it and it correct the problem. But it is something I will look close at in the future to see if it happens again.

    Frog. I noticed that and forgot to take it out in processing. I think it's the lens. It doesn't seem to be there when using my other lens's. I read somewhere the EFS17-85 is prone to get dust inside the lens. I have no idea how to fix that but if anyone has any info please let me know.

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