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    Artificial Sun

    shot this image at work normally looking up at 40 some feet high,but for this one i was sitting up in the crane seat getting a birds eye view of these powerful lights,from ground you can not look directly into them. question here is that could this image been taken better and how,? nikon d50 at f5.6 , 1/4 sec exposure, 98mm focal length, aperature prioty, and the white balance was on auto.
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    nikon sb-800
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    Re: Artificial Sun

    Quote Originally Posted by polarbeardiggers
    [snip] question here is that could this image been taken better and how,? nikon d50 at f5.6 , 1/4 sec exposure, 98mm focal length, aperature prioty, and the white balance was on auto.
    I guess it depends on what you want to show, i.e., part of the light, the entire light, the details of the light, the light and its environment, a group of lights, etc.?

    Right now I think it's too tight.

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    Re: Artificial Sun

    [Right now I think it's too tight.[/QUOTE]

    I agree with AE. If you backed off a bit, it might give us some context. Can you make arrangements to get up that high again?



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    Re: Artificial Sun

    yes i can but not until next friday and next time i will take different views of the light,to show more background and less detail of the light by not getting too close.thanks for the input guys.
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    55mm-200mm vr.
    Nikon F65
    28mm-80mm
    28mm-70mm
    Sony H5 p&s
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    nikon sb-800
    nikon sb-600

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    Re: Artificial Sun

    I would be interested to see those pics as well. Will you post those?

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    Re: Artificial Sun

    sure i'll post them ,thanks for looking.
    Nikon D300
    11mm-16mm tokina f2.8
    18mm-55mm
    55mm-200mm vr.
    Nikon F65
    28mm-80mm
    28mm-70mm
    Sony H5 p&s
    1.7 tele lens
    nikon sb-800
    nikon sb-600

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    Re: Artificial Sun

    I like the vantage point you have access to. Here is what I think I would try from looking at this image.
    I would set the camera on Manual setting and kep the aperture where you had it at about 5.6. Set the WB to tungsten.Using a wide angle I would shoot the main light you have in your image in a vertical format placing the light up in the top part of the frame as it is now and the rest of the scene from the wide angle would hopefully catch a glimpse of what is going on below the light. Rather than us always lookig up at the lights, we would be up with the lights looking down somewhat. Also, reduce your exposure a bit to bring some deeper ambience here. Expose more for the actual light so that everything else will be dark and only the immediate elements being hit by the light will be visible. it might be interesting. Of course, try different exposures, but do not rely on the camera to give you one. I would reduce from what you have here now.
    I agree with others comments on how this is a bit tight right now, but I do like the vantage point
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    Re: Artificial Sun

    Hey you got a Nikon D. Now I really am outclassed.

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    Re: Artificial Sun

    don't worry Don when we go out together this spring i'll adjust my whitebalance off abit,.
    Nikon D300
    11mm-16mm tokina f2.8
    18mm-55mm
    55mm-200mm vr.
    Nikon F65
    28mm-80mm
    28mm-70mm
    Sony H5 p&s
    1.7 tele lens
    nikon sb-800
    nikon sb-600

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    Re: Artificial Sun

    Did you use any type of flash to counteract the lights?

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    Re: Artificial Sun

    no i didn't use the flash on camera, just what available lighting being so bright and so many of them,i had my 55-200 mm vr lens on,and switched to my kit lens 18-55mm.

    yes gary i will try what you mentioned,thanks for the input.
    Nikon D300
    11mm-16mm tokina f2.8
    18mm-55mm
    55mm-200mm vr.
    Nikon F65
    28mm-80mm
    28mm-70mm
    Sony H5 p&s
    1.7 tele lens
    nikon sb-800
    nikon sb-600

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    Re: Artificial Sun

    I really would like to see the area below the lamp here. Just seems too close to the edge for me. Otherwise, decent subject and a different type of environment than I usually see.

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    Re: Artificial Sun Updated march 8th

    here's a few more shots updated to what more you like to see.
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails Artificial Sun-view-above-below.jpg   Artificial Sun-between.jpg   Artificial Sun-catwalk-above-lights..jpg   Artificial Sun-heavenly-lights-shine-below..jpg  
    Nikon D300
    11mm-16mm tokina f2.8
    18mm-55mm
    55mm-200mm vr.
    Nikon F65
    28mm-80mm
    28mm-70mm
    Sony H5 p&s
    1.7 tele lens
    nikon sb-800
    nikon sb-600

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