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I prefer the colour ones. the colour ads to these types of shot. For this type of shot to work, i think it has to be sleeker, less variation in the BG, like more of a solid colour with the swirls the only focal element. With more contrast and variation in the swirls themselves and not the BG.
Arne, This is not as good as the last and needs to be sharper in places.
Roger R.
"I hope we will never see the day when photo shops sell little schema grills to clamp onto our viewfinders; and the Golden Rule will never be found etched on our ground glass."from The mind's eye by Henri Cartier-Bresson
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Thanks for the comments. I guess its just one of those deals where I like the progress of what I'm doing, but it doesn't translate into a great shot for others. Yet, it keeps me trying.
Greg, you use the plural, are you referring to this shot and "Red"?
If so, it is a canon 50d with a 100mm macro lens, sometimes with close up filters. I fill up a rectangular shaped vase with water and just start dripping food coloring into the water. For "Wisp" I did a 180 of the image.
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