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    Windows 2005

    I don't think this is the sort of pic that can really attract much in the way of critique, but I like to show what I've been doing with my camera just to feel involved!

    It is a shot of the glass roof of the o2 centre on Finchley Road, North London - a modern building with a collection of restaurants, a big cinema, and the odd shop in it. Not a great deal to say really - its just a collection of lines and light really, but I liked it!

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    Re: Windows 2005

    Quote Originally Posted by mattp
    I don't think this is the sort of pic that can really attract much in the way of critique, but I like to show what I've been doing with my camera just to feel involved!

    It is a shot of the glass roof of the o2 centre on Finchley Road, North London - a modern building with a collection of restaurants, a big cinema, and the odd shop in it. Not a great deal to say really - its just a collection of lines and light really, but I liked it!

    matt
    I like it a lot Matt, but that probably doesn't surprise anyone. I took it into PS to look at it and tried some duotone combinations that I liked because it strengthened the patterns and the subtle variations within the shadows seemed more in evidence. I also like this version which is just an inversion and levels adjustment. Hope you don't mind.
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    Re: Windows 2005

    Course I don't mind - glad you like it. I think your inverted version looks really striking! The little traditionalist living inside me keeps whispering that I shouldn't go too crazy with my shots in PS, but when I see things like that I wonder if I shouldn't just cut loose sometimes

    Cheers

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    Re: Windows 2005

    Inverting an original and controlling contrast and exposure after the shot has been done to photos for the past 150 years or so. How much more traditional can you get??
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    Re: Windows 2005

    I prefer OS X...


    nice shot dude, I like what chunk did with it though.
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    Re: Windows 2005

    Chunk - you've got me there, good point well made! ;)

    Thanks Almo - and this is no way an endorsement of Mr Gates, although if he turned up at my door with a big old bag of money saying he simply had to base his new advertising campaign around my shot, I would probably be prepared to let his people speak to my people. Although I would need some people. I wonder if my mum's free..)

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    Re: Windows 2005

    If ole' Billy Gates showed up on my doorstep I'd take his ATM card and tie him up in the closet.
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    Re: Windows 2005

    Oh BTW Almo, when's that last kidnapping and extortion thingy of yours coming up for trial?



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    Re: Windows 2005

    Quote Originally Posted by mattp
    Oh BTW Almo, when's that last kidnapping and extortion thingy of yours coming up for trial?



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    Re: Windows 2005

    Matt,

    Love it. Great abstract feel, and Chunk's edit adds greatly to it! Nice eye.

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    Re: Windows 2005

    Quote Originally Posted by mattp
    I don't think this is the sort of pic that can really attract much in the way of critique, but I like to show what I've been doing with my camera just to feel involved!

    It is a shot of the glass roof of the o2 centre on Finchley Road, North London - a modern building with a collection of restaurants, a big cinema, and the odd shop in it. Not a great deal to say really - its just a collection of lines and light really, but I liked it!

    matt

    Geometric abstracts can be very challenging to present in b&w since contrast is one the main ingredients, and pattern is the second ingredient. much easier in color imho. Ask yourself what it was about the mind's eye vision you had that drew your attention, and focus on bringing that out in the image.
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