Photo Critique Forum

Please post no more than five images a day and respond to as many images as you post. Critics, please be constructive, specific, and nice! Moderated by gahspidy and mtbbrian.
Featured Photo
Photo by hminx

Photo by hminx
Featured Photo Archive >>
By posting on the Photo Critique forum you agree to post only your own photos, be respectful, and give back as much as you receive. This is a moderated forum and anything abusive or off-topic will be removed.
Results 1 to 6 of 6

Thread: Windmill?

  1. #1
    Senior Member readingr's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2004
    Location
    Basingstoke UK
    Posts
    4,564

    Windmill?

    I need feedback on this.
    Roger
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails Windmill?-_mg_5522-640.jpg  
    "I hope we will never see the day when photo shops sell little schema grills to clamp onto our viewfinders; and the Golden Rule will never be found etched on our ground glass." from The mind's eye by Henri Cartier-Bresson

    My Web Site: www.readingr.com

    DSLR
    Canon 5D; EF100-400 F4.5-5.6L IS USM; EF24-70 F2.8L USM 50mm F1.8 II; EF 100 F2.8 Macro
    Digital
    Canon Powershot Pro 1; Canon Ixus 100


  2. #2
    Senior Shooter Greg McCary's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2006
    Location
    Rome Ga.
    Posts
    10,550

    Re: Windmill?

    I like it Roger but it does seem a little flat. But just a little. Maybe boost some contrast and color. The birds really add to the picture. Great subject.
    I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..

    Sony a99/a7R

  3. #3
    Moderator Didache's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2005
    Location
    London England
    Posts
    2,040

    Re: Windmill?

    Roger ... I'm with Greg on this .. it is a pleasing shot of a photogenic subject, but it needs a little boost. In a way, I think you are at the mercy of winter light, and a plain sky doesn't help. Even so, with a little more pop it will be a fine picture.

    Cheers
    Mike
    Mike Dales ARPS
    My website: www.mikedalesphotography.co.uk

  4. #4
    racing > all
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Location
    Levittown, PA
    Posts
    95

    Re: Windmill?

    Agreed...the colors of the underbrush and the windmill look like one...differentiate them. Add a bit more to the left or right to take it off center a bit, but I love how much you did with the water and sky - many people horribly overcrop for my tastes.
    98 Cobra - AI racecar - 300HP, lots of suspension

    Canon EOS Digital Rebel XSi (450D)
    Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
    Canon EF-S 55-250mm f/4-5.6 IS

    So long as you credit me as the original photographer, go to town with my work. You can't make it any worse.

  5. #5
    mod squad gahspidy's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2004
    Location
    N.Y. U.S.A.
    Posts
    8,368

    Re: Windmill?

    I think the lighting is wrong for this and the blank sky hurts a bit. The light seems to be coming from in front and to the side of the mill, which is making much of what we see of it and the fg dark. I'm not feeling the view of being behind the mill either. I think a different angle might be better. Perhaps shooting this mill with much of the surroundings included might be good as opposed to cropping in on it. If you can readily get back to this scene, maybe try out a few various comps with different angles and see where that goes.
    please do not edit and repost my photos


    gary


  6. #6
    Senior Member readingr's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2004
    Location
    Basingstoke UK
    Posts
    4,564

    Re: Windmill?

    This is straight out of the camera with just a levels tweak,

    I have a few more which I'll include in a new thread later.

    I took a few but the problem with this is that there are reed beds all around the area and the rest of the images really are of the back and reed beds included.

    I have tried boosting the windmill but without much luck if anyone wants a play feel free. I could not get rid of the flatness. It was taken in the late evening. I took the camera out the following morning with just grey clouds and it washed it out so much I didn't even bother taking one picture.

    Thanks to all for the guidance on this. If someone does have a go and success then let me know what you did. I can post a bigger version in the gallery if you want.

    Roger
    "I hope we will never see the day when photo shops sell little schema grills to clamp onto our viewfinders; and the Golden Rule will never be found etched on our ground glass." from The mind's eye by Henri Cartier-Bresson

    My Web Site: www.readingr.com

    DSLR
    Canon 5D; EF100-400 F4.5-5.6L IS USM; EF24-70 F2.8L USM 50mm F1.8 II; EF 100 F2.8 Macro
    Digital
    Canon Powershot Pro 1; Canon Ixus 100


Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •