Dear Megan,

When I saw your title, I expected a semi naked woman reclining on a couch or something! Sorry about that. On a more serious note, this isn't really what I would expect of a Venus. Classically, from what I can remember, a Venus is depicted more in either the "emerging from the sea" pose, or the "reclining on a couch with attending Cupid" pose. I would say that it needs work. You might try the reclining on a couch pose, clothed of course. I think especially with the Holga, you might be able to approach the "look" of the old masters' Venus. I am sorry for being very vague on all this. Hope this helps.

Drew