Two pictures...

[Sebastien B]

Hello,

Here are two different pictures:
-One of my girlfriend
-One taken at Lake blanche, Utah

I did some PS work on them (mainly saturation and contrast)

Well, what do you think?

Seb

[Sebastien B]

I did something wrong with the upload, here is the 2nd picture...

[Jezz]

i love the first one, like something you normally see in a frame when you buy it, not that that is always a good thing just not sure about the missing head? that does detract from it for me however it does leave something to the imagination!

[mikehulsebus]

big fan of the first image, very different, something you wouldn't think to do
second one is good looking to--did you perhaps clone out part of that mountain though? that first dip has a sudden edge to it

[Sebastian]

In the first one, the foot take me right out of the frame, but it's easily solved with a little bit of room around it. The crop feels ind of awkward at the rm and shoulder area. I like the light and idea though!

Second one doesn't work for me all too well. Not enough foreground interest to draw my eye in, uninteresting light, and a sky too devoid of clouds or color to really justify being that prominent in the frame.

Take care.

[bobbythebandit]

Hello,

Here are two different pictures:
-One of my girlfriend
-One taken at Lake blanche, Utah

I did some PS work on them (mainly saturation and contrast)

Well, what do you think?

Seb

The first one a lot.Light, texture, shapes and brilliant pose.Well done, love the tone of colour on her legs. The second i dont care a lot for, needs something to give it the wow factor. Good work and keep posting.
Bobby

[schrackman]

the second picture has nice color saturation, but not too crazy about the composition. The first one is GREAT! Wonderful creativity and lighting. I especially like, as someone else mentioned, that the upper body portion us not shown, which leaves a sense of wonder for the view. My only nitpick is that the feet are toooo close to the edge of the photo. I would give just a little breathing space. Other than that, excellent work!

Ray

[bjtindle]

Hello,

Here are two different pictures:
-One of my girlfriend
-One taken at Lake blanche, Utah

I did some PS work on them (mainly saturation and contrast)

Well, what do you think?

Seb

I like the first one myself, as someone said it sure leaves something to your imagination. Very unique view. The second doesn't do much for me, I can't however quite put my finger on what it might be. I think I would have to agree that there is not really any particular focus of this photo.

Nice job, Seb!

Betty

[Sebastien B]

I agree, after a second look to the landscape picture, nothing really catches the eye, I will try again. Here is a modified picture of my girl friend, I add some space near her foot, I think it looks better? What do you think?

Thanks again for all your feedbacks, that is very helpful!

Seb

[Sebastien B]

Sorry I forgot to upload the file...

[schrackman]

That's more like it!

Ray

[bjtindle]

Sorry I forgot to upload the file...

I agree, the second posting with the added space is even better, which I didn't think possible.

Betty